Overall this is bomb from a rookie, you can rhyme no doubt, you got thought in your rhyme, no doubt. Now you gotta up the vocab, add some punches, spark off some metas, and get into that shit deep with your mind. Basically, if you're just startin' like I think you said you were, then you got a decent foundation, now add the complications that show true skill and not just intelligence and natural rhyming abilities. Holla atcha' boy ~1~

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