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Old 03-02-05, 09:42 AM   #35
Triple_N
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The mixing needs to be fixed up..the vocals is a tad loud....the delivery is bad..your jus shouting...an ya lyrics are no where near as intense as ya delivery...you should calm down a make ya flow more melodicbut still hype.....throw some multies in ya flow..it was good but coulda been better...the lyrics was cool....overall track coulda been better 7/10
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