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Old 03-02-05, 12:27 PM   #36
Spektikul
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Lemme break this battle down:

Opener: Cali, MC's was alright but didnt hit as hard.
Closer: Cali, It was so good, plus MC's wanst hard at all.
Punches: Cali, Overall harder punches than MC.
Personals: MC, Even tho he might not have hit hard, he had a lot.
Metas: Both, I think it was about even in this area.
Multies: Neither, I didn't catch any.
Vocab: Neither, Nothing really stood out.
Flow: Cali, MC's lines were extended too long in places
Creativity: Cali, For the links, MC...I wasnt feeling the pic

Overall:

MC - Like I said, I dont like when kats basically post their opponents picture up and rap about it. Battle your opponent instead of their pic. All you do is look around in it looking for insignificant items such as a fast food cup which could have been from anywhere, and tie it into the verse. "Cali, you got a map on your wall, is that cause you dont know Geography"...its just gay. Also your lines were really stretched, try fixing that next time and also try elevating your vocab to make your overall verse more effective.

Cali - Good drop son, those links were funny...you obviously did some researching for this one. You could have used some work on your vocab, but your witty punches kind of made me forget about it. Next time all Id have to say for elevation is try to throw some multies into your verse to make it look more tech. You already got the wordplay down, it'll just be the icing on the cake. Good job on this win.