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Old 03-02-05, 01:31 PM   #11
Acuity
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From: East London, (Hackney)
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beat is gangsta straight up and down

not feelin your chorus...it just sounds a lil poor..you could have emphasised the "SMACK DOWN" wid like an over-dub or amplifying it...rather than trying to shout it at the end of your line which just sounds rushed

your lyrics=decent, nuttin wrong, flow is good falls off in places and its just too laid back and casual for this type pf track..shit need some emotion some anger n shit bre, u get me?..your flow was on beat but it didnt fit this type of track..

your quality is better than mine but that is still a bit unclear....

overall-kinda disappointed as one of the UK Mc's on the site ppl always sayin dat the second best UK MC is Mad Dogg, but off this joint bre, i didnt see what all the hype round u was about, u get me? jus tryin 2 be real...-7/10

no h8
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