wow man, great story so far....it ended abruptly, i couldnt tell whether or not you were going to continue it, because you said you write books, but keep it up,work that imagination.. try and get your stuff published incase you havent yet, your imagery and your vocabulary were good here, definately off to a good start with this..1

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