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Old 03-02-05, 03:49 PM   #10
MaRVJay
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okay...dis battle was alrite no creativity from really from nun of u

opener-mj good opener kind of a personal and multi...throw u forced dat bar da ryhme so dat made it weak

structure-throw stop seperatin ya lines fukks up ya flow

punchlines-mj took dis 1 he had a couple of em nothin spectacular...an throw i wasn't feelin nun of ur's

creativity-nun from u both

personals-nun from u both...

finisher-wasn't really feelin nun but mj's was betta...throw whut da fuk did u mean by dat line

enjoyed-mj i think he was consistant threw out dis whole battle...thorw work on ya shit fam get creative and stop forcin shit 2 ryhme


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