aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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Voted For: MjGrEeN
okay...dis battle was alrite no creativity from really from nun of u
opener-mj good opener kind of a personal and multi...throw u forced dat bar da ryhme so dat made it weak
structure-throw stop seperatin ya lines fukks up ya flow
punchlines-mj took dis 1 he had a couple of em nothin spectacular...an throw i wasn't feelin nun of ur's
creativity-nun from u both
personals-nun from u both...
finisher-wasn't really feelin nun but mj's was betta...throw whut da fuk did u mean by dat line
enjoyed-mj i think he was consistant threw out dis whole battle...thorw work on ya shit fam get creative and stop forcin shit 2 ryhme
return da favor links r in my sig
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^^he's scared.lol
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