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Old 03-02-05, 03:59 PM   #10
.Judicial.
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you both had strong points and weak points in ur verse....u were on and off with decent punches but u get my vote...u need to work on ur structure a little bit depict your verse waz elementary......u need to elevate on a lil bit of everything....get more creative and deeper wit punches then you will do iight thats all 1
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