I'm not feeling the beat, your delivery sounds like eminems first cd infinite before he was signed, sounds real similar to that. It's good at points. I just don't really like the beat. The flow is on point for real, at times i could tell it was a rough draft, but you ripped it. If you went back over it would probably help out a lot. I just don't like the beat, but mayb thats just me. B-

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