not feeling the quality or the first verse really, your not really saying anything out standing, not that you have to, but it is kind of boring me...............I guess if it is a free its kool....................see now you are hitting it, pass thru ya area, three feet of......etc.......you need a little work on your delivery. I am losing you on the third, your flow is falling off, like your not freestylin, but remembering what you said before, then you come back to freestylin, and your off. not bad for a free, but not the greatest. I need to peep some more of your shit.


hit my link up when you get the chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850