ariight, listening.....

not feeling how you come into it... its not really you, its just the beat is boring, and ur prescence aint that great... Sounds like your very new to recording, if thats the case, then your on the right track, just keep dropping songs... the verse was kinda short- u changed up how u said that hook thing at the end, or someone else said, i dunno, it sounds more off the second time, and u shoulda faded out the beat instead of letting it just stop abruptly like that-- I think the whole thing all in all just needed more, cuz the beat was weak, sounded like it was missing something, and ur flow sounded very amateurish... keep droppin it though, no hate, just bein honest...1

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