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Old 03-02-05, 10:58 PM   #4
Germ
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^ yeah, i was feeling....although some areas coulda been better....flow was rough in some areas because i felt you forced the vocab and the multies a little too much....but its good for a quick one, im sure it coulda been fine tuned if you took your time, good topic...i was feeling the emotion, your a good writer man.....keep up yo.....7/10
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