^ yeah, man, now i'll post my feed. this was actually really good for some random shit....its a nice change when everything else in the forum is dissing and about 'niggas', you know....flow was great, you seem to have that down, seemed like you weren't that consistent the whole way through (if that was possible with your topic)....but some parts were a bit dull, like the slitting of eyelids, haha, wasnt feeling that....but the rest of it was good, laughed at some parts too................keep writing more shit man, that was dope, ahhahaha, puberty line was the best, haha

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