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Old 03-02-05, 11:23 PM   #25
Magic5
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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Kesse
structure is good.. flow is good for the most part.. what is up with your rhyme scheme?.. perfect and reject dont rhyme.. ahead and but to be dont rhyme.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played.. maybe one of your punches connected.. no good personals..

pictureperfect2
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of your punches connected.. your closer was tight as hell.. that was a good personal..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. pictureperfect2 had the better rhyme scheme.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. pictureperfect2 gets my vote..

VOTE - PICTUREPERFECT2