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Old 03-03-05, 08:13 AM   #20
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
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Voted For: Drama Queen

My vote gose to DQ,.. But Dopeman held his ground
he's new to topicals so I felt this was a good battle..

Dopeman,.. Shit man u got loads of potential to be
a dope topical head,...

I felt your verse had very good flow,. alright vocab
at times and deep emotion, I did think it was a bit
predictable on the other hand I would read your verse
and know how you was going to close the next line.
But apart from that it was kool I liked what you did
with the topic as well...

DQ,.. What can I say,... Flowed really nice as well..
dope vocab and the emotions were gripping,... very
well written verse, again used the topic well with
some nice hidden complexity.

Vote DQ,... But look out for dope in the future.

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