Voted For: MjGrEeN

soft as sherbert????
that is uhmmm.....forced, an uncreative, an i dont like your whole structure of 2 bars, then a space, it dosent flow at all, its like your trynna tell jokes an not rhyme, so no Throwdest, ya dont get this battle, be more witty in your rhymes, an structure it ALOT Better, an you'll be alright

MJ, Ya flow was alright, few decent personals, wasnt feelin that J-Dot line, but other then that, it was pretty nice, not the best by any means, but enough ta get u my vote

return the fave

Peace

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