Voted For: DoContinue

X, Structure your flows alot better, i could barely read your stuff man, but from what i could make out of ya verse, it was half decent, few okay multies, no real creativity or humour in ya personals, an you need alt of eleation in your stucture, its like your verse was just 1 whole line, an thats not good......

D.C Ya verse was sick, had some real hard hittin personals an punches, an you connected the build up too your hard pun, real nicely, ya got this one easily

RTF

Peace out

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