Voted For: anxiety

anxiety: I absolutely LOVE your approach on the topic because it's all truth and so easy for all of us to relate to.

It's the one thing you seeked, what you aimed to get...
The hardest part of rap is to gain respect...
^your ending says it all...

Like how the story progressed: on top, down to earth, top of ya game...and so on and so forth. Found good balance with your vocab and had your flow on lock, structure was nice. Was a very good read because it kept you focussed throughout the whole thing, showed us how quick these things can change. Had this "in your face" attitude, just telling it how it is which I was feeling for sure! Tight piece...


Socrates: you had a dope approach on topic as well, allowed you to use more emotion than the twist anxiety gave to it. Vocab was nice, not too basic but not too complicated either so it remained easy to follow. Story progressed real well even though everything happened quite fast in the part in middle. The ending was quite well even though you might have had somewhat stronger emotion there but overall,it was raw and good.

So we were the average perfect couple, left others envious
Thats when the flock of vulture like rumors began to circle us
^like these lines, especially the "average perfect couple", it's like a contradictio in terminis...

In the end, my vote goes to anxiety because I liked his approach of the topic a little more because it's easier for everyone to relate to and has such a sense of reality but both did really well!

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