Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck

fuck eh....this is how i see it

Bill Cosby
>Fuck H!T-sT!Ck, this bitch aint gonna go far
His dopeness is as clear to see as his avatar
-played, 3/10
>Your on par with the worst, you can only look up
Multies dont win battles, so your verse is a fuck up
lackin creativity...coulda been better 4/10
>You wanna hook up with the best, I cant see it
Dope is an adjective, and you just wanna be it
-liked this line.....6/10
>Shit, I dont wanna drag this on, poor H!T-sT!Ck
He saw "drag", and grabbed his fuckin lip stick
-coulda been worded better 6/10
>So Sh!t-d!cK, I mean H!T-sT!Ck, get off the net
Only you on here bothered about a fuckin rep
-no.....3/10
>Faggot your in debt, you cant pay your dues
Record = 1-0, you beat someone who'll only lose
-again, poor wordplay....4/10

overall: 26/60....only reason you lost this....inconsistent with your verse and poor vocab and wordplay, looks like you can get the hang of battling, jus pop into the tutorials or somethin an tune up a little, cause alot of your punches were ruined by your shitty usage of vocab....decent verse though

Hit Stick...
>B.C on that 'herb shit', a win this *guys hopin*...
ya verse is 'regular weed' to me it dont even get my *eyes open*.../1
-dont use stars next time.....plus, little played 5/10
>Ya gunna need 'luck', so grip and keep that *clover close*...
im like 'coke' if i went '12 lines' it would be an *overdose*.../2
-another played line....drug lines are too obvious....5/10
>my punches so hard they'll sprain ya *ribs through the sceen*...
and ya free flow im gunna ignore b/c we all kno *kids say the darndest things*.../3
-nice play off the name 6/10
>niggas probably 18 and at *home still*...
im not worried about u every one *owns bills*.../4 [money]
-upp the wordplay.....6/10
>dont ever let me see u makin any *comment on me*...
i already got u shook,u'll be shaking for years after this fight like *muhhamed ali*.../5
-meh....4/10
>i laugh at my own jokes like sayin this *whores nice*...
theres no chance of u gettin 'saved' in this battle becuz ur *Before.Christ*.../6
-decent closer....first line sucked....7/10

overall: 33/60....shit, to me son, you almost lost this because of your poor/inconsistent structure and flow....you started off good, flowing nicely, but when you hit your 4th bar.....what the fuck happened, evertyhing shortened up and that takes aways alot of effectiveness from your verse....thats not what you wana do....but like BC, you gotta up your wordplay and vocab, had alot of good ideas for punches but the set up were a little lacking...nah mean...so, yeah, just work on that....elevate....wird

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