Voted For: tranz$cript

okay, i had to check the rules again cause i thought this was a whack battle...no offense

tranzscript....need to work on your punches man, you have the right idea, but alot of your lines were just fillers....and the "like WHAT" line, doesnt work well....you had good flow and structure, and you kept consistent, and thats why your getting my vote, but you gotta elevate man...

the profit.....hands down, you didnt do anything real well here....dont type out your verse like that, its very confusing and you wanna make it easy on the voters so you might actually get votes, cause you have no structure at all, and flow was bad......and your punches and personals....dont try insulting him saying your "girl is always on her period" thats not a punch...that makes me wanna laugh at you, you pretty much just talked about yourself this whole battle and again, thats not what you wanna do.....word, you both need ta elevate alot...keep up though

v/tranzskriptz....for attempting punches, better flow and structure

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