ya..same here..I felt u started off good and kinda fell off at the end...but it was good...I think next time u should try and add some more emotion and imagery...because to me this is more of a spoken word poetry type of peice...
and yo return the favour on my om...I just dropped this fresh like 2 minutes ago...it will be much appreciated~one~ stay up son...
genocide sickness(part one) the beginning
^^thanks...