to 7.5/10 to start off saying..I liked it...I had a favourite line in there somewhere about "all to myself in the room where I hid" or something like that...yo It was good
vocab-decent
structure-pretty good
imagery-wass aiight
tone-was good
all that stuff...u know...just make sure u return the favour yo...uppin
genocide sickness
part one) the beginning
^^thanks....