Voted For: Mad Dog

Good battles from both here.

Mad Dog: opener was real good, had a simplicity about it with a good punch that hit hard. Closer was even a lot better. Nice close, good metaphor in the punch about all-standing stadium, which worked real well. Overall your verse flowed really well the punches were all hitting hard. Structure was good too which made it real easy to read and was entertaining enough for a merking.

Cincanatus: opener was good, nice metaphor but the punch wasnt as hard-hitting. Closer was weak, didnt really hit that hard. It was a good bar and good to close but needed to have more of an edge. Overall ya flow was ok, but heavy going with some really good punches and metapphors, your structure was good too but the verse wasnt as entertaining or annoying. Nice verse but i didnt feel it as much.

Sorry Cincanatus bro

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