beat it coo...

1st dude- aight mang flow was aight ...kinda fell off in a few parts sound like you ran out of breathe...work on ya breathe control...lyrics were coo....delivery was coo too...

2nd dude- aight flow was on point...good rhyme scheme...lyrics were ok...delivery was pretty good tho...

3rd dude- flow was coo on the beat...lyrics were str8 on here...delivery was coo...but i think you could have been a lil better on this not sure what it is...maybe its just ya voice...

4th dude- aight flow was coo on this beat...either you have a little lisp.....or you need to swallow ya spit...lyrics were pretty good...got some good multis...delivery is good....


overall this was a good track fellas. 1

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