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Old 03-03-05, 08:41 PM   #24
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Cincanatus

aight this was a good battle by both of yall and here is my breakdown:

Buck: ya shit was aight... structure was off in places which sorta hurt the flow a little... overall flow was ok at best. punches were pretty good actualy.. had some good ones in there... personals lacked in the hard hitting department which hurt you in the end... vocab was ok but could have been better... overall ok verse but ive seen better from you 5/10

Cin- ya shit was pretty good... like bucks i wasnt feelin the structure and flow on this one... need to work on that cause in some battles that will hurt you... punches as well as personals were pretty dope... i liked how u spelled out his name n shit... kinda creative... vocab was pretty good... i think your upping on vocab fa sho... overall not a bad verse... 7/10

aight that is how i see it... no hate either of yall but Cin got this one... no hate buck but thats just how i see it

VOTE- CIN