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Old 03-03-05, 10:22 PM   #12
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Voted For: Chief

i thought u had a messy structure but over all i thought you took it... the punches werent that bad...i liked the closer .. opener was weak.. your metaphors were ok. alot of your shit coulda been worded differently i think.. but over all not a bad drop.. the structure was the only thing that bothered me

Omni- eh alright drop it was just to basic and didnt contain the vocab that chief had.. nice punches. your opener was aight jus not all that great... your structure owned his which was ight..but otherwise i jus thought sheif came out harder than you in this one.. no hate

for coming out harder. and haveing better vocab. and metas

sheif takes this one...


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