classic shit here...................hittin the beat on point............nice hook too, feelin it, might want to change one or two words to make it more memorable..............good story tellin, nas like or even old school rap type story telling slick rickish, nice shit, your hot, gotta give you an A for this, and I don't give a lot of em, peace and hit me if you get the chance

get at me if you get a chance
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