Voted For: Hammer

This bitch was born October the fourth*1
Anniversary of disaster, in america’s north
not bad
Trying to clap easy victories and got caught*2
You go to high school, why is it by me you get taught?*3
aii
So proudly say you “had bread before rap”*4
Either you a baker or just a spoilt little brat*5
cool
Your in Detroit, but wat side of 8mile we ask*6
Actually live under the bridge with a bottle and brown bag
no
Over all good verse my fav line was that bread one. Some dope punches there


im bout to kill dis cat like blood cells to a fag man wit HIV nigga...
he got hemp plants?..well too bad my blunts are bigga...
Na
im D.Bill for a reason.."nailin" u down wit my bigga figures...
im "rollin" dis battle up...
and as long as u still alive..im gon "light" u up til ya "paper made" flows give up...
Am i trippin or did you just rhyme up with up?
so in otha words, im pissin on ya like R.Kelly did his girl slave...
forfit, cuz there is now way u can write eight lines in 30min anyway...
not feelin

DB wasnt liking your verse no real punches .

return favour plz


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