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Voted For: Buck.Shot
Buck.Shots Verse
Says I'm whack, but she followed me into The Crew (Jury)
Nobody likes ya rhymes, they just wanna Screw!
^ basic could be better really flow good though
I'ma hit the nail on the Head, n make ya Wig Flip
This tranny got a Bigger dick than Skriptz!
^ Can see why you mentioned Skriptz name now punch was meh
Chubby Cheeks, lookin like a Young Oprah
Bitch so fat.......
....They got literally ''put it in ya Belly'' when they Poke-ya!
^ lol that was funny flowed aight as well
Claimed i never beat a Vet when her Record aint hit Eleven
Bout ta open a chain of Stores in ya Honour...
.......''Legs Open TwentyFour-SEVEN!''
^ lol punch good nice steady diss
She went from Lil Nae, then claimed ta be a 'Queen'
Her rhymes wouldnt ''Shine'' if ya coated 'em in Window Sheen!
^ Nice punch good flow
Just so you know, I enjoy the Hate, an It gives me Wood
So go 'head n admit it, You'd sit on my Face if you Could!
^ not really a diss you started picking up then went down again
I'ma take you on a stroll thru the Hood...
....Let my Boys run a Train
Only reazon she think she ''Wise'' dissin me is.....
......She Constantly Givin' BRAIN!
^ Nice closer good diss nicely picked up at the end
Black Queens Verse
Comparing ur text to mine is like comparing playboy to the bible
Cause Buck just a cheap substitution for something desirable
^ Nice opener good rhyme diss good
No satis..faction, deep breathe and pause to effect,
He lost so many battles he still dont think dat he whack
^ Don't rhyme...all i got to say on that
But if you wanna go for rapping, i'll take you out in sections,
Voting is extremly one sided, like a cuban prez election
^ Not a diss jus a regular punch sorry
But if you wanna try and win, by all means go for it,
Or you can be a bitch and hide in a hole, gopher it
^ lol wordplay nice good bar lol
Hold the glamour now, pretend like you a movie big fuckin star,
Cuz after these hits, your head will be seeing moving stars
^ lol punch could be mad better this was kinda kiddie
ya lines ridiculous, like mute cows, i herd you were dumb
i could "ridicule less" but that wouldn't be as much fun
^ Closer was aight wordplay on herd but i weren't feelin it as much
Overall
As far as consistancy goes i think Buck.Shot won this more disses than Queen but both definitely didn't shine in this battle...3 days for an RTF or ima remove this vote...
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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