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Voted For: Mad Dog

good battle didn't really see no spectacular lines...but

mad dog

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium
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umm u had a real solid verse...i se u didn't really go 4 da real creative punchlines or personals u were just tryin da make him feel low with lines like "this so little challenge..his name i wont mention" lol i like dat...ya wordplay was good it seem like u were holdin back a lil tho but overall i liked ya verse

cincanatus...

"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn

Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge

Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
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umm i didn't like ya opener ya shit was real basic...u had a couple nice personals ya punches were okay but u were forcin words 2 ryhme n i hate dat shit..some lines were stretched but i keep up with ya flow overall good verse

opener-mad dog
structure-mad dog
punchlines-cincanatus
wordplay-mad dog
creativity-a tie
flow-mad dog
multis-mad dog..he had like 1
personals-mad dog..da 8th line bout cin changin his name
finisher-mad dog..i like dat punch
enjoyed-mad dog....his verse was kind of simple but efective cin u could of came a lil harder *pause* forcin words 2 ryhme gotta stop tho fam

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