u seem like afraid to spit, kinda hesitant
didnt feel da intro
beat wasnt feeln, it was ight but too repeatative
quality was pretty good, good job wif dubs
u had a few good lyrics
ur flow was basic, u just need work wif delivery and mic presence
and the song ended instant, try to fade out or something next time

5/10

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