not bad, dont think its the best by you, mainly because the second half of your verse you toned it down a bit....didnt use as good of vocab and wordplay as you did in the first half and it lost alot of your imagery....and you started using simple metaphors that i just wasnt feeling, like buffy and all that....but it wasnt bad, just thought you coulda made it better in the second half,,,,keep up thou

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