Voted For: .MictoriouS.

ok, heres how i see it, not gunna break it down or anything, but....

overdose....thought you did okay,, your punches were weak and alot of them have been used already......so i just suggest being a little more creative, and, upping wordplay and vocab so you can get more effectiveness outta your punches......but, your flow and structure were alright, so you can build off that.....you just need a little more complexity and creativity at your punch attempts.

mictorious.......i thought you had the harder punches/personals........but the one thing i had a problem with was your structure, very had to follow at times and should be worked on for future battles....but, as far as the battle goes, you took this one, your punches were more thought out, had good wordplay which helped also, just flow and structure were my only problems, but still had enough to get my vote

v/mictorious

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