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Old 03-04-05, 04:06 PM   #7
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778/1000...haha j/m.....not bad man....the second bar of the chorus, thought flow was a little off...but the main verse, not bad, some lines were a little unflowing, but i liked it....had some good emotion in there, last part was probs the best, or the first 2 bars,...yeah, i cant decide, but nice piece 8/10.......hahahah, j/m, just up vocab a little, yeah, thats my feed
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