ok no diss, but the beat is boring. and when i hear the hook then i thought the song was gone be really good, but you didnt come out real good on it. but you fixed that up later in the verse. the transition from the end of the verse to the hook was kinda messed up. but like Seventhird said, if u new to recording then you on the right track to becomin hot

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