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Old 03-04-05, 05:35 PM   #20
Prophysics
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This was feedback posted for .Grafh.

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you murked this kid, damn

ok i will honestly own both of you guys but here
graf you win, you had better structure wich automaitcally made you win,laso you had some punches, no metaphores tho, but decent verse, both of you need to elevate alot, also work on your personals, you could have worded alot of them better to make them harder hitting..

AK, ok your just plain out wack, go elavte and stick to new poelpe hwo have just joined the site...and also work on your structure, that will help you out alot in all areas....all in all your wack
vote=graf

well you stupid fucks made it 400 post so i will just leave feedback
and RTF on anyone of my battles