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Old 03-04-05, 09:18 PM   #9
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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Don't Test- this beat too simple.. (in a bad way) it come off as annoyin as hell

vocals are hella low... you sound very, i mean very distant from the mic, i like the way you said the intro, your flow was fine until you tried to sing, your lyrics are str8. you fell off in a few spaces.. this was kinda short but for what it was you need sum work.. lyrically u aight, just workin on mic presence and how u deliver..
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