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Old 03-04-05, 10:16 PM   #24
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Voted For: Kesse


Kesse,
Had Some Nice Punches Up In Here Man Pretty Good, Personals Was Major Here, I Liked how You Made Em' Into Punches Also Your Vocabulary Damn Cozzin Good Verse Bruh, This Is The Best Vocab I've Seen On RV, Decent, One Thing I Wasn't Digin Is Your Structure Man, Try And Fix That Up A Little, Also Your Word Play Get That Up Man

OneStep
Nice Verse You Had Some Alright Punches Not Really Hitting Hard Though But It Was Alright, Your Personals You Could Of Done Better Then That Man, Your Structure I'd Have To Saw Was Horrible Man Try And line The Bars Up To Match Each Other Feel Me?? And Your Vocabulary Man Needs Alot Of Help Weerd,

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