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Voted For: Cincanatus
Aight check it......
Mad Dog-
Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
^^^nice word play-but ya gotta work on those punches
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
^^^you used face Twice......Bad idea....and a weak punch
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
^^^didnt make sence.....theres no such thing as a all standin stadium....work on that.........but ill give you points for origionality.........oh and by the way for people wit bad eye sight .......it doesnt help that you made it small and not to mention blue.....
ok
Cin-
IP:
Opener
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
^^^ok first off we know what a opner and a closer is ya dont need to spell it out....
Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
^^^^^great punches......oh and that multi didnt go unnoticed........
Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
^^^^^aaight punch but still better than what Mad Brought to the battle....
aight heres the bottom line.....
Mad.....you lacked alot of things.....but dont get me wrong.....nice verse.....i can see you elevating quick.....keep it up....
Cin-you won this battle but it was a close one.......keep on practin those punches......good word play.......but the thing you lack the most was personals....study up on those you gonna need it as you elevate.......
So my vote goes to Cin
Return tha favor Me Vs. Kesse on tha first page....Peayce
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