iight..
This shit was pretty good lyrically, you just need more experience mixing and spittin on the mic... Go to Audio Assistance forum and look for a thread Everything you need, and then look under cool edit, theres alot of tips in there on how to make your tracks sound more professional, and just keep spittin, try and put a lil more energy into your delivery, but u on the right path so far, good shit...1

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