The Ups and Downs of Life
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Originally Posted by Doomsday
Typing as I listen: Your flow gets lumpy which is a damn shame. Need some inflection cuz the deliv is straight 2-dimnsional. The punches...lol wow man. Now THAT'S what the fuck I wanna hear - Personals EVERY line. God damn. Well, at least I know there's one other battler here. The bald-spot line LOL. The finisher was hillarious, lol. I'm gonna stop commenting on beats unless their production was ass since the beat is all personal choice. If the flow was perfected and you brought the delivery this track needed this shit would have been one of the best tracks I've heard on most boards.
P.S. You remind me of S.L.U.G.
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appreciate the feed... the flow does get really sloppy in spots cuz it was real rushed, I wanted to make a point that I dont need 2 weeks to drop a diss... but yea appreciate the honesty...1
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