Voted For: Mad Dog

Cincanatus:

Opener
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
Weak opener...
Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
Didnt make sense...
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
dope...
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
Not much of a punch...
Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
Not a punch...

Mad Dog:

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
ok opener...
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
not bad...
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
hard punch...
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
Good stuff...
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
Damn hard closer!!!

I can honestly say that Mad Dog took this one easily and Im sure the votes will show. He had dope vocab, flow and nice use of multies and metaphors. Cincanatus, you need to do a little elevating. Try using harder punches and more personals next time. Also, fix your structure. I wasnt feeling the "opener, middle, closer" divisions of your verse. I envy you for battling vets, and think you have the skills to beat them...you just gotta try harder next time.

V/Mad Dog...................