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Old 03-05-05, 01:11 AM   #19
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Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
This whole part could use work. 10/20


1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
You need to work on some of your lines but some were there. 12/20


Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
Wasn't feeling the closer. I saw it coming out differently. 6/10

Mad Dog
Honestly I thought you could have came way better. I mean I saw your shit and I was amazed but you didn't come hard and the main rule in a battle. Come at him with all you got. I sound like jedi or some shit.
Over all 28




"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
I say it was good....9/10

You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I wasn't feeling this line. 6/10

I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
hmmm I liked this. Had some humor to it. 10/10

Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
Wasn't feeling this line at all. 4/10

Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
Old and I don't like it. 4/10

Cincanatus
I liked some of the parts of your verse and i didn't like some othe parts. I liked alot of your lines. Alot of creativity and I like that. Keep it up. You'll go far with shit like this.





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