As everyone will notice right away, the strongest aspect of this piece is the emotion for sure. So raw and pure how you spit this, making us feel the pain and struggle you going through. I can't really relate to this myself because I haven't been in a similar situation before but you are showing us how hard it is. Found good balance with your vocab, imagery was good and structure was nice as well with the different paragraphs. Props to you for this wonderful piece and hang in there...Loved reading this!

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