Hells Fire
Your verse was pretty good man.. What I really like most about your verse is your multi's.. sadly, this is the only part that made your verse sound good.. Your imagery really wasn't there.. and it was the samething with your emotion.. I couldn't see or feel anything.. Your vocab was on point, but you should try some metaphors.. that would really make it stand out..

Drama Queen
This was another good verse that i've read from you DQ, but really i've seen alot better from you... You made it seem like u rushed it or didn't even care.. but some how still made it good. Well your emotion was there, and your storyline was good.. just like wut Architekt sed.. I too could relate to your verse.. And at the end.. i knew someone would use something like you did.. so you should try to thing of something like a shocker (twist) next time you know


Anxiety
It's interesting how your vocab really wasn't that good in this verse but you made it seem like it didn't matter due to your emotion.. Your verse really did stand out because this is seriously the same thing i went through.for example.. I got too cocky battling nos and got ko'd..damn that sucked haha.... This verse basiclly has very few bad things in it.. well actually none that i could think of??

Vote: Anxiety..

Good Battle To All Contestants!!

Congrads To Anxiety

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