Thread: I.L. vs ub2ez
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Old 03-05-05, 11:49 AM   #9
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I just don't give a fuck!
 
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Voted For: I.L.

L.I.
Your 0-1, without a doubt, you'll never be known in this world
Damn right you slap a bitch,no wonder you fight like a girl
lol
Cut it straight to the facts and see you rappin is a sin
Shit I've gotten more referrals than you'll ever get wins
nah
Team spirit? Effort? Nah theres barely nothin yah left with
Damn man, the only 100% you give us is your loss percentage!
nice
Ground zero is wack dog, its manslaughter in this shit now dont shout
His crew name just mixes where he ends up against me and his vote count
no

Nice verse... the percentage thing was nice. Rest were decent. Decent verse.

Man i'm Grammitical,so weak why i spit at you,you pit-i-ful
I was glad when A.I. got rid-of-u,my writin straight shit-on-u
this was self glorification
So Listen Geek, I'll Inflict Your Speech, Have Ya Bitches Face Like Prison Meat

Cuz My Dick Long Hard Pipe Give Ya Braces And Fixs Ya Teeth
again, this was self g. and you've fucked the structure this the space inbetween both lines
Ya Punches arent Connectin cuz Mark 'Forces Mettaphors' Worst than a Star Wars Lesson

Ya Fake and Spittin Fiction I'll Blow Out Ya Steady Star' and Really Kill the Marked Shins
self g.
Trust Nerves ya Body should Know ya Worthless Tissue is Just Something That Nobody Nose

Ya Rhymes Dont Flow Ya Frequency-Marks Dont count 9X Like 50Cent-Radios...
no
Herb Rape..This shit is Cold Remarkably u sucks at Ballin and Always Cooked in Bowls(herb football)

Fill ya Corpse With Holes Schools gone Take out Marks like Elementary Drawin Contro
this was wack

This verse had too much self glorification. How do you expect to win with no disses? Also, i'd get rid of the gap. It's annoying. Gotta give this to L.I.

v/ L.I.

p.s. that little movie in ur sig is dope. lmao