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stupid bitch just accept that you'll get punched and then bruised
whats under your name isnt prehistoric, just all the punches you use
played to death, still, decent
rip this bitch, destroy her entire rep when i bruise her
cuz when these punches take flight, ya left as a soar loser
nah
see you wonder why none around you, far from the best
..cuz all your family fucking DIED after reading some of ya text
no
see i rip shit strategically while you throw punches helter skelter
stupid bitch thought she was eminem just cuz she lives at the shelter!
lmao... this was nice
guys only want your ugly ass for the money, usually a loner
see ya man has it hard....cuz you cant even give him a boner
nah.

Decent verse. You had a couple of good lines (your opener and the eminem thing.) Couldn't really see anything else going for ya. All-in-all, a pretty decent.

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kid your not a cantidate, so set aside the mic.
perform ya best, ppl still didnt vote napolean dynomite.
nah
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish
no, comparisons are wack
why attempt a win? its like getting OJ off the meds.
claim you was dope, then got owned by a topical head
no, who owned him?
hes got diddy's ego, heres some words to know & quote.
dont beef cali, if you dont even have enough posts to vote
nah
at least diddy's got a name though, this lame doesnt.
most newbs hate to lose, but like wicked...he loves it
nah
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name
no
rematch me tomorrow, theres nothing left to say.
plus, i need time to prewrite on a guy who just joined today
nah

Pretty weak verse. Couldn't see anything from you that came close to good. Stay away from using comparisons. No quoteable's. and . . had 2 so...

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