smooth beat, reminds me of some old school rap...........but some of the kicks sound off..................your flow is off, you hit it sometimes but that is a real easy beat to ride.............deep emotional shit....................not feeling the hook, it was ok, just needed some wording, the back in the day part when you just say it, but when you do the hook with the dr. part, you need to remix the wording on that and try and make it more catchy, you have some work to do, but it has potential........hit me if you get the chance


hit me when you get the chance
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