Voted For: Cincanatus

Normal Punches-Cincanatus, ok punches overall. Not the greatest punches, but overall I think you material was better than Mad Dog's. Mad Dog, a lot of self glorification lines and that is what killed your punches.

Personal Punches- Mad Dog, I saw a couple of personals, and your material was better than Cincanatus'. Cincanatus, no personals really. You had some wordplay, but that's it.

Metaphors-Cincanatus, your metaphors were ok, but not that strong or original metaphors. Mad Dog, your metaphors were rather boring and not that great. Stadium line was the best line, but that isn't saying much.

Multiple Rhymes-Mad Dog, you had them, and they were pretty good too. Cincanatus, no real multis, work on putting them in.

Structure-Tie, both had pretty good structure.

Flow-Mad Dog, I felt I could follow your flow a bit better than Cincantus'. Your simplicity kept it flowing. Cincanatus, not bad flow, just not as fluid as Mad Dog's.

Word Play-Cincanatus, you had some wordplay, and it wasn't too bad, but not completely original. Work on more original wordplay. Mad Dog, I didn't notice much wordplay in your verse. Try including some.

Cincanatus, I think you win this based on punches and having some wordplay. Your verse was more complex, but you need to work on personals and working in multis.

Mad Dog, I think being away from text so long hurt you. A lot of self glorification and fake personals hurt you. Not a lot of wordplay either. Work on punches and personals.

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v/Cincanatus

One Vote. One Battle. One Victory

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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