Voted For: OneStepBeyond

you win becuse you got a mad better structure and your punches where decent
i didnt get bored at all, but since Kesse your structure was off which mad it harder to read which made it wack

both of you need to eleavte with the punches and metaphores

decent battle tho just work on strucuture Kesse

can you return the favor on any battle that is in my sig

thanks