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Old 03-05-05, 09:50 PM   #48
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

This aint spitting this pimping watch as i pound this whore
Used to be a 'Low Rider' no wonder his elevation is ground floor
Pound this whore and ground floor don't rhyme... o.k punch but its weak for an opener, specially rhyme scheme wise
You been Whipping herbs real vets no its easy to beat ya
Cuz you ride 'Socrates' dick harder then Philosophy teachers
aside from the grammar mistakes in the first line, the bar was good... decent punch
Must be slap boxing cuz those punches is way soft
Why you make threads dickriding similar to gay thoughts? (link 1)
i found this bar weak... the rhyme seemed force cuz ur second bar didn't flow in any normal fashion, and the punch was uber generic
This dude lost before the battle started look at his nickname
If he a 'M.C'?' in a 'Firetruck'........ how he gonna spit flames?
i liked this bar again... solid personal, went together well, setup was on point
No mention as a vet so a garbage ass alais suited him perfectly
The kids a groupie just look at the thread how he worships me!! ((link 2))
links to him sayin he stole beef from you, I expected him sayin you were nice or something positive about you... personal seems inefective- nice rhymes [/b]
Easily kill him i remind him of (villians) the kids scared!
How bout you call in 'Soc' to wit you?

...just to make this shit fair!(link 4)
this bar was o.k... but again the correlation is kinda wack... so they wanted a tag team battle, big deal
This 'Kid' is straight 'P' i can smell it like dogs in heat
Cuz like written calendars on jail walls his bars is weak/week
Probly best bar I've read so far, good wordplay, punch was solid, i liked this bar
Funny how you claim you so nice tell everybody you dope
When your so wack you not only recycle lines

..you recycle jokes!! (Posts 1&2)
...............and thats just sad bro
This was a good use of the link, funny bar, good personal... solid finisher
7/10 over all... cuz i didn't like the opener, and 2 bars were weak in my oppinion... (3 points off)

9th..
It's not Intelligent to think I'm Flow or Daz, but no one told ya
So every personal you drop will be fake, like your persona
solid opener, good punch, solid multi... if he actually spit a line dissin flow or daz it woulda been mint
Seriously, I don't see how you can call someone a faker
When ya gangster style is on "e", even more than ravers
lol, this was funny - good personal on bein online all the time
Think we fear you 'cuz you're 24 and caught a felony
While you beef with teens on the internet

…does somebody lack self-esteem?
lol, i liked this bar again solid personal, good punch
When we called you a wigger you said "No homo, I'm Muslim" then you holla
At Tha Q tryin' to preach the bible… oooh, I'm telling Allah!
ROFLMAO... omg that shit is classic, keep the personals droppin
And about your arms - aren't tatoos a Muslim sin? Well I'm not too sure
But I do know you made "I'm not a Terrorist" when no one thought you were
lol, personals constantly so far, funny punch good 3 syllable rhyme scheme there
And I'll stop there, I won't make a line about droppin' bombs
I'll just key fast, like what you clearly forgot to do for Ramadan
lol- he keeps hittin with the personals... again solid bar, solid multi
Your religion is non-violent, but you claim to hold tight heaters
Yet the only time you bare arms is in that wife beater
this was iight, funny but not as good as the previous few - again though good personal
Another thing about it, and advice is why I mention it
But go get some sun, you're startin' to blend in with it!
rofl... this one was real witty again, good punch/personal
And you're past the drinking age, hit the bars, I'm sure it will be ill
But instead of buyin' bottles you're getting' Biggie-sized refills
LMAO... damn son, the personals aint stopped all battle through- solid shit here, one of my favorite bars
Your activity on RV is like ya figure, you're always around, dude
And you'll say my personals are played,

'cuz you keep giving us more reasons to clown you
Solid finisher... good personal, .. all in all i give you a 8.5 out of 10, cuz one bar in the middle didn't seem to role with the consistency of the others, but ur opener and finisher and almost everything else inbetween was witty as hell, the thing that really separated the verses is all the personals- and that this one was more consistent... cali came strong, but mc firetruck killed this with the 1 pic and his verse... i was dissapointed with a couple of cali's links, cuz I expected too see some funny shit, but only really got that on the last link

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